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Grey Matter
Contributed by
CrazyCowboy557
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Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 11:19:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
fictional
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I feel like hiding my face in a picture
Dorian Grey would have gave this lecture
The man who would never age
The picture behind the face
A pact with the devil was made
And his looks would never fade
His soul would live in fire
But his career would grow higher and higher
But I'm not Dorian Grey, I'm an ordinary man
I can't give my soul for some worthless sand
Still I wonder sometimes, what it would be like
Living the all American dream, be like Mike
I just want to write my songs and play my tunes
And sometimes watch the late night cartoons
But still I wonder, if I was Bugs Bunny
What would happen if I wasn't funny
Or if I was the invisible man
And you could see me where I stand
Would it all be worth the price
Could I deal with the painful vice
Copyright ©
CrazyCowboy557
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2005-08-25 11:19:22]
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Re: Grey Matter
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by Archie on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 01:56:32 PM AEST
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| I can't answer that question for you. Your poem however is well written and flows for the most part very well. You keep the reader's attention until the last line. |
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Re: Grey Matter
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by Shattered_soul on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 06:05:26 PM AEST
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It was a nice flow and good rhyme, congradulations... (he he)
good write.
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Re: Grey Matter
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 11:05:14 PM AEST
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Excellent question to ponder. Hmmm, maybe in my foolish youth when I thought life would last forever. Maybe in my career days when things had to be bigger and better. Not today though, for I know that my soul will need to be free to fly to my Father Spirit who will set my soul free. "Get thee behind me Satan," for now I truly see.
Great write,
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Re: Grey Matter
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 12:13:16 AM AEST
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Original and thought provoking , I love this poem cowboy !! Late night cartoons , cool , lol , i like the family guy!!
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Re: Grey Matter
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by CrazyCowboy557 on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 12:20:10 AM AEST
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| lol, Family Guy, Futurama, and Aqua Teen Hunger Force is what I was referring to. I was watching Aqua Teen when I wrote this. |
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