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The Angels Cried
Contributed by
darkhorse71
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Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 01:37:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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At night I walk these city streets
wondering what went wrong,
I gave you everything I had
and then I gave you more.
We had a love that was so right,
but you left me alone
to fight the night.
And the angels cried.
By day I sit down at the park
wishing you were here;
remembering all the joy we shared,
the memories, oh so clear.
Another couple walks on by;
alone again, I slowly die.
and the angels cried,
their tears rained down on me
the angels cried;
they knew what was would never be,
that you were the only one for me,
yes the angels cried
about the love that somehow died.
Darkhorse71
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darkhorse71
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2005-08-25 13:37:13]
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Re: The Angels Cried
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by Archie on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 01:41:10 PM AEST
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| Great poem. I would like to see the lyric version being that I am a lyric writer. |
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Re: The Angels Cried
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by shelby on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 02:33:13 PM AEST
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did a wonderful job on this and I agree with Archie would like to see the lyric version also can you add music to it? Wish I could do both. I play some and write alot but the two never meet ROFLMAO
Michelle |
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Re: The Angels Cried
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by blondie_64865 on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 02:40:06 PM AEST
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| very sweet and well written poem. Nice dedication for someone also |
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Re: The Angels Cried
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by brew on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 03:16:13 PM AEST
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Beautifully, penned.....most songs are like writes, anyways.! They come from the inner, and could be sung.! It becomes, a song when music is put with it.! Good job,
Brew~ |
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Re: The Angels Cried
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by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 03:19:42 PM AEST
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John, again a lovely but sad poem, I can so feel your "pain" in this one. Its very hard n difficult to grow over the one you loved so dear and thought of to be the one in yer life. That feeling will always be there, somewhere hidden deep inside and the lil things in life can bring them out.
Huggsss,
Nats. |
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Re: The Angels Cried
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by forsaken_soul33 on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 05:00:13 PM AEST
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This was a great write. I can feel the pain in this poem. I am sorry for your lost love. I hope that things get better for you. keep on writting.
bye,
☺Mando☺ |
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Re: The Angels Cried
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by Shnannon on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 06:09:03 PM AEST
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| Great poem. I'd love to see/hear this as a song. It's really heartfelt, I could picture everything as I read it. Keep up the good work! |
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Re: The Angels Cried
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 10:51:59 PM AEST
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| That was amazing, I can really relate, when you lose the one, I have my self. But just keep your head high, you never know. Excellent write, keep it up. |
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