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How I WIsh
Contributed by
blondie_64865
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Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 02:37:15 PM in AEST
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I wish I could make your pain go away
I wish I could make all your wishes stay
I wish i could make you so happy that your spirits could soar
I wish I wasn't the type of person who is such a bore
I wish togther we could make our hearts fly
I wish i could put a glimmer back in your eye
I wish all these things for you
That each one comes true so you won't be so blue
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Re: How I WIsh
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 03:03:23 PM AEST
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| A very sweet poem, I loved reading it, sometimes we have all wished for the same exact things. SLipSiX. Keep up the good writing. |
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Re: How I WIsh
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 04:03:46 PM AEST
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Very edifying!
It's wonderful, it's godly, to wish so well for others.
Reveals a loving and big heart!
Thanks for posting this profoundly moving piece of poetry.
Love and peace
Elizabeth Dandy |
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Re: How I WIsh
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by forsaken_soul33 on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 05:33:14 PM AEST
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This was a short and sweet poem. I really enjoyed reading it.
bye,
☺Mando☺ |
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Re: How I WIsh
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by Shnannon on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 05:53:28 PM AEST
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| This is short and sweet, i really like it. I wish you all the best in your future writing, keep it up! |
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