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These Late Words
Contributed by
forsaken_soul33
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Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 06:20:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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As you lie in that open casket,
I can only regret that I never said,
How much I loved you,
But you lay before my eyes cold and dead.
I take your pale cold hand,
And drop tears all over you.
I start to cry and wonder,
'Without you, how will I make it through?'
I remember just last week,
You stood right next to me.
We were laughing and you would smile.
For you to open your eyes is my plea.
I wish you could hear me,
But your gone now.
Your gone,
And this I disavow.
I know it's to late,
But maybe you can hear me.
I love you,
God, please send her back to me.
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Re: These Late Words
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 06:25:14 PM AEST
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A sad story and a lesson to us all that we should say how we really feel.
Sometimes it's easier to think it than actually say it though.
Steve |
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Re: These Late Words
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by Archie on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 06:26:39 PM AEST
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| This must have been really hard to write. I applaud your courage and i hope you will find peace for your heart. |
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Re: These Late Words
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 06:38:39 PM AEST
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| I am very sorry for your lost. I would say that time heals but it really doesn't you just end up coping some how. I know how hard this had to be for you to write for i have lost a friend that i've known for 10 years, 4 months ago. Wish you strengh to carry on. Very good write. |
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Re: These Late Words
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 06:43:17 PM AEST
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*****I know it's to late,
But maybe you can hear me.
I love you,
God, please send her back to me.
This is why we must all live for today, because we have no clue if tomorrow will come, and what it will bring..
Very sad write.. many messages written. Hopefully, this write will teach many others. It taught me another lesson of wisdom for this day..
Thank you,
Raquel Leah ; ))
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