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The Bowery
Contributed by
Lancaster
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Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 11:16:30 PM in AEST
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I cant wait one minute more
There is something that needs to escape
Something tells me to run out that kitchen door
I cant stand the sight of it, its just not right is it?
How can someone be so cruel and terribly wicked?
Especially on such a beautiful glowing star filled night
Sorry, I cant accept your gift of charity
I wont be made a case of, in case youve found love
In the occurrence that I dont return
In the event the world begins to burn
Then perhaps one last kiss
We will all be gone
Consider it a lesson learned
A critique of the behavior absurd
Comical to the point of an hysterical dirty word
We will all remember
We will always be heard
I cant take this heat much longer
Feels like Im melting inside
Feels like the wax has settled and has engulfed my
Inside, used again
Has clotted my blood
And has brought the pain
My lungs
Air sacks burst
No air
Just a dry desert thirst
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Re: The Bowery
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 11:43:08 PM AEST
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We've got to get you a date...pronto; )
Style and substance were both very good, as was the title, but I must say...I think your argument is weak amigo: )
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(Who had a laugh over a certain someone's panic attack) lol |
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Re: The Bowery
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by lostrelic on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 12:46:23 AM AEST
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| interesting write like the style very diffrent thoughts though |
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Re: The Bowery
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by Archie on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 01:23:21 AM AEST
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| I think this is a great write. The picture in my mind is too wierd to describe that this poem brings. But believe me if that happened to me I would probably run too. |
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