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A moment
Contributed by
Davinah
on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 02:32:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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After all this time spent in oblivion,
Could I possibly look you in the eye?
Those blue mystic rivers to drown in
Id gladly let myself sink away.
I only long for one touch.
One single kiss from your sweet lips.
A moment to die for.
That moment I crave for.
To smell your skin, to feel you
To reach for you and to touch you within
To bring you to your knees
To do to you as you did to me
To put a spell on you
As you have bewitched me
You have no knowledge of my desire
Nor do I have of yours
But if youd grant me one moment with you
I could make it last forever
Copyright ©
Davinah
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2005-08-26 02:32:09]
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Re: A moment
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by Jane_Doe on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 03:54:50 AM AEST
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| I think I can relate to this a lot. It really hit home for me. I loved it. And I mean, I REALLY loved it. I hope that you still have that opportunity to have that moment. If so, keep hoping. |
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Re: A moment
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by tiggytom on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 04:00:50 AM AEST
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| Heartfelt poem, I feel this thanks |
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Re: A moment
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by Archie on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 10:12:13 AM AEST
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This song quote is what i think describes your poem most.
"Let me hold you tight
if only for one night
Let me keep you near
to ease away your fear
It will be so nice
If only for one night"
Quote from "If only for one night" by Luther Vandross
Your poem is cool. From my stand point I would not accept a relationship offer this way. I could not. |
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Re: A moment
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by Winterland on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 11:27:28 AM AEST
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The desire and passion comes through in this poem very well. Good job!
Jennifer |
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Re: A moment
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 05:04:39 PM AEST
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| Well done |
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Re: A moment
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by liquidsunshine on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 12:56:43 AM AEST
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I wish I were so confident that I could know my one last chance, one last moment would last forever.
Love and peace,
Chelsea
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