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Black Rose
Contributed by
mckayla
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Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 02:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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your word declines a sense of dignity
unthoughtful and greedy
you didn't think anyone could see
but the whole world sees your insensetivity
Your ungreatfull pursues will tie you to hell
mabey there they will praise you
here now you are just a borderline of guilt
here they will refine you to a painful life
bury you beneath a blanket of sin
you will lay unaware of your incomputence
I pity you for your just a waist of skin
your a thorn on a black rose
a painful prick unable to kill,
yet able to bring blood to the surface
you are the definition of hate
Katherine L Chaffee
Copyright 2003 Katherine L Chaffee
Copyright ©
mckayla
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2003-01-15 02:20:00]
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Re: Black Rose
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by thorns on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 02:42:22 AM AEST
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| very harsh. wouldn't like to be the one you're so mad at. |
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Re: Black Rose
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by thorns on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 02:44:21 AM AEST
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| (had to read it a 2nd time) Very effective immage of a "torn on a black rose" @ the end. |
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Re: Black Rose
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Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 02:44:34 AM AEST
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| (had to read it a 2nd time) Very effective immage of a "thorn on a black rose" @ the end. |
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Re: Black Rose
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 09:37:07 AM AEST
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WoW!!!!!!! McKayla this is sooo beautifully written, wow ...and harsh...so much anger here in this write, i wouldnt want to be the one you write about in anger that's for s ure.....you keep writing and i'll keep reading...you write beautifully my friend...
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Re: Black Rose
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by mckayla on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 10:59:19 AM AEST
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It was the way I feel about my ex- husband
He had moved across the country with his girlfriend and never calls or sees his kids.
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Re: Black Rose
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by Ramfire on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 04:41:03 PM AEST
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I understand better now. Seems he hurt you deeply. I'm sorry.
Regards,
Ramfire |
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Re: Black Rose
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by roisin on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 08:53:18 PM AEST
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I too could hear your anger!!! well written..
rosie |
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Re: Black Rose
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by wordsy on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 10:01:53 PM AEST
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Words of anger woven with the fire that burns within.
A good write,
wordsy. |
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Re: Black Rose
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by M on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 11:52:13 AM AEST
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| you express yourself really well, its a beautiful poem, and the 'your a thorn on a black rose' part, is really good, well done, keep writing, i love your writing |
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Re: Black Rose
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 10:39:13 AM AEST
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| tight write. You should definetly keep it up! |
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Re: Black Rose
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by Chef-Boy-R-C on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 11:16:23 AM AEST
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| Great poem. Glad you're not mad at me!! |
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Re: Black Rose
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 05:55:58 PM AEST
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wow, sorry i missed this one...great write..lots of anger, the person must of hurt you pretty bad, so i will dedicate an angry poem to them as well...either that or you can give me their address...lol
hugs
kara
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Re: Black Rose
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by ArdRi79 on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 11:06:44 PM AEST
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| I love the imagery you used McKayla, it makes a very abraisive poem really entertaining...and scarey I like it :) |
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