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I Fell Asleep
Contributed by
drogedarain
on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 11:20:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I fell asleep at the wheel and woke up a wreck.
Wondering how I got here and how I could get back,
to things I had been steering towards.
The places, people and things that I once knew would add
zing to my life.
Was it the right or the left that took me down that wrong path.
The path of self destruction that caused the exhaustion, inducing
lethargy and making me so weak.
I grasped the wheel trying hard not to sleep but the exhaustion had
taken such hold of me, making my eyes, arms and mind so weak,
I could not hold on I fell asleep at the wheel and woke up a wreck.
How, if ever will I get back!
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drogedarain
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2005-08-26 11:20:45]
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Re: I Fell Asleep
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by Winterland on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 11:42:50 AM AEST
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This is a poem that I think many of us can relate to from one time of our lives or another. Great analogy and very good write. Keep it up!
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Re: I Fell Asleep
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by hunterj2k on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 12:36:26 PM AEST
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Nice flow and imagery.
Keep up the good work! |
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Re: I Fell Asleep
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by Archie on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 02:13:11 PM AEST
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| Great poem. As to your question, you need a map. |
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Re: I Fell Asleep
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by brew on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 02:30:54 PM AEST
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You can keep steering towards the correct path.! But it has to BE YOUR choice. I wrote a tiny write about something similiar.yet, it was for my brother and his messed up life.! Just go the correct way.....follow the gut, heart, and mind.! Very good write.! Very inspiring.
Brew~ |
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Re: I Fell Asleep
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 02:51:08 PM AEST
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Very good use of metaphors in this. I loved this piece. Wishing you all the best...
Welcome to YPDC....hope you like it here..
Jenni |
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Re: I Fell Asleep
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 01:12:23 PM AEST
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This could almost be a self struggle type of write. Well done. Keep up the good work!
Scorp. |
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Re: I Fell Asleep
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by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 12th January 2011 @ 05:25:20 PM AEST
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I can relate to this flow
and getting back is so hard at times. |
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Re: I Fell Asleep
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 6th February 2012 @ 08:47:03 AM AEST
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| Excellent flow |
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