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oh, so tired
Contributed by
xXxmegsxXx
on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 04:55:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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oh so tired
of my life
i hate the fact
i use the knife
oh so tired
please let it end
it's driving me
round the bend
oh so tired
of being me
i want to escape
i want to be free
oh so tired
of shedding tears
again and again
for these past years
oh so tired
i wish i'd just die
so i'll hurt no longer
so i won't cry
oh so tired
but the end's coming
and i'll no longer be
amoung the living
oh so tired
but soon i wont be
i'll rest forever
and be happy
oh so tired
but soon i'll feel peace
1 pill, 2 pills, 3 pills,
and my pain will cease
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2005-08-26 16:55:36]
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Re: oh, so tired
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 04:59:23 PM AEST
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| Very good write, very emotional, and relatable, a lot of people feel that way at times, and most likely it'll get worse before it gets better but if you keep pushing, you'll be just fine. Good luck and keep it up. |
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Re: oh, so tired
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by jemer on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 05:41:44 AM AEST
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| hey megan gd poem very gd use of words and phrases well done! |
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