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Another Time, Another Face (Part 1)
Contributed by
CrazyCowboy557
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Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 12:10:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I remember The Light In Your Eyes
And when there was Nothing New Under The Moon
I watched the Purple Rain wash away the flies
And when you left, I was signing that same tune
You were my kryptonite
My weakness will always be you
I can never win this fight
So I'll just enjoy the view
Next door an angel sat
In her chair every afternoon
That night my heart fell flat
Lying under a harvest moon
Still today I sit under the stars
Wonder where you are today
Wonder if you made it to Mars
What if you had stayed?
Did I ever let you down?
Maybe that day in June
Are you afraid of clowns?
Are we under the same moon?
I'll always remember that light in your eyes
And there's still Nothing New Under The Moon
The Purple Rain doesn't affect the flies
And I'm still singing the same tune
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CrazyCowboy557
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2005-08-27 00:10:45]
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Re: Another Time, Another Face (Part 1)
(User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 12:19:44 AM AEST
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I really really liked this poem. The rhyme isn't cheesy, the rhythm feels good and the song titles added a familiar yet unique touch.
I was afraid this would make me cry again (I've recently had to let my One True Love walk away) but... this was actually just... nice to read.
I really enjoyed it.
Love and peace,
Chelsea |
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Re: Another Time, Another Face (Part 1)
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by CrazyCowboy557 on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 12:22:06 AM AEST
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| When I wrote this I kinda chocked up. I haven't seen the person that I refer to in this poem in 8 years, but she's always on my mind, even today |
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