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Chancing Breath
Contributed by
Rasputin_the_Second
on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 12:17:50 AM in AEST
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So here I am
in the stolen cloak of a gentleman
And I'm asking, dear
for your company
your sweet company
This flower at my side
All since with a frosty walk, yet warm within my breast
All still in our silken talk, yet power in our breath
Halting 'fore the willow
That dry and barren willow
Passing by that willow
Onward with you,
Tender Flower
Can you hear it calling?
Can you feel it beating?
Look, a gentle flushing
A faint glint
A mellow tint of light
This secret in my pocket
Can you hear it calling?
Can you feel it beating?
Look, a gentle flushing
In a delicate movement
I hold my destiny in my hand
So here I am
in the soft mist of the winter's night
And I'm bowing down
to the likeness of an angel
the envy of an angel
And I ask you
Be my angel
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Re: Chancing Breath
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by Archie on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 03:34:18 AM AEST
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You wrote a great poem here. It reminded me of this song:
"In the madness of moonlight
When I sigh hold me close dear
Chances are you believe the stars
that fill the skies are in my eyes"
Quote from "Chances are" by Johnny Mathis
Your poem is great |
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Re: Chancing Breath
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 08:16:30 AM AEST
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| Very clever write, kept making me read the next line. Thanks.............Mike |
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Re: Chancing Breath
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by anitajames on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 02:38:22 PM AEST
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| Absolutely beautiful. Great write! |
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Re: Chancing Breath
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 10:31:17 PM AEST
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Beautiful work. I love the simple, otherworldly style, and the repetition, which is very well done. An inspiring read.
Andrew |
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Re: Chancing Breath
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by LittleMissWonderful on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 11:52:28 AM AEST
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I really like this one also. It's so simple, yet emotional...and beautiful.
Love,
Victoria |
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