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In dead gardens you grow
Contributed by
jessicka
on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 05:19:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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My darkest despair
My wilting flower
Your rancid petals
Smell sweet to me
The thorn in my side
Too scared to remove
Forbidden fruit
With a sour taste
Clumsy Hands
Eager to pluck
Fragile you break
Then scatter away
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Re: In dead gardens you grow
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by Jane_Doe on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 05:22:40 AM AEST
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| The figurative language was beautiful here. I really loved it although it was so very sad. Great write. |
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Re: In dead gardens you grow
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by Ecly on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 05:57:18 AM AEST
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| I agree, the language was spectacular. The sort of unbounded and raw feeling you really need in this art. |
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Re: In dead gardens you grow
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by RickShaw on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 11:13:52 AM AEST
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| Beaitiful poem and great economy of words. |
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Re: In dead gardens you grow
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by n2dep2care on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 05:26:58 PM AEST
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Wow! This is awesome! Very rich and deep. Keep up the good work!
Laurie |
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Re: In dead gardens you grow
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by kcampbell on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 09:41:50 AM AEST
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| beautifully written |
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