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The Inaudible Word (....fake....)
Contributed by
abnormalpunk
on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 01:57:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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is this how you
[hide]
lie
act so fake
do you find it okay
to act like this
[to lie to everyone ::ourselves::]
you lie
to yourself
to me to make everyone else happy
[ignoring my ::our:: hearts]
cant you see what your doing
[to me...]
do you think
[i'm happy]
[its ok to be like this]
please
[i beg you]
either
be real
or be fake by yourself
[because....]
....im done
with this
[but hopefully....]
not you....
but its your choice...
Copyright ©
abnormalpunk
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2005-08-28 13:57:48]
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Re: The Inaudible Word (....fake....)
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by Archie on
Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 09:17:31 PM AEST
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| Like your last poem (The last poem I read by you) This is a generalization) When you say you with out specifying you mean "all" If that is what you mean then you only have view of your world and you hurts. (I can tell that you mostly like to listen to your own words because you don't read many others) do you hate them (us) and why? Who has hurt you so bad that you have to blame the world. For that matter what does the world owe you?. Ofcourse all of this is an assumption because you do not make things clear. (Who is the "fake" ) |
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Re: The Inaudible Word (....fake....)
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by russ-dawg on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 08:32:10 PM AEST
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like your others i thought this poem was cool if i understand it right some one is lieing to you and others and you know they are a fake and its making you angery (if thats what you mean i can relate) anyways great write!
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