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Beginning of the end
Contributed by
darkscorpio
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Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 08:39:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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About to make the turn, down a path I never wanted
Decision has been made, scared as hell, but undaunted
Ive tried for some time, to step away
From this choice of separation, put it off another day
But as time has gone on, the distance has grown
Between our heart and our minds, and the angry seeds have sown
A harvest of resentment, and an empty lonely space
That is aching in my heart, and the tears stream down my face
14 years together, but I cant stop this anymore
Its time to put this all aside, and close this hurtful door
08/28/05
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Re: Beginning of the end
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by Oceandreamer on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 08:47:05 PM AEST
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| Nice poem!It has a great flow.Thanx for posting. |
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Re: Beginning of the end
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by brew on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 09:27:16 PM AEST
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Very sad..................sometimes thats why I dont want my heart to be given............I know its the coward way out. But ppl shouldnt hurt. Sometimes it does not work..........and I beleive the key to making it work and keep, is COMMUNICATION. My opinion.
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Re: Beginning of the end
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 10:06:16 PM AEST
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great write in the 1st place. i loved it! and i, too, close my self off. even though it's not smart. not much i can say, 'cept i hope that everything turns out okay for you soon! great write, keep it up!
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Re: Beginning of the end
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by BethB88 on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 05:03:13 AM AEST
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| The first two lines have a powerful rhythm, the poem is very much in a style I enjoy. Well done ~! |
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