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Suicidal Thoughts
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 10:08:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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All the thoughts of suicide
All the plans of how to die
Thinking of how to try today,
How to make yourself go away
Wondering if its the gun or knife
Thats going to try to take your life
Or maybe today it will be the rope
Taking every breath and every hope
A lot of thinking about suicide
Going through everyones mind
Wondering why they are stuck here
Living life alone- their only fear
Dark thoughts passing through
Suicidal thoughts in me and you
Suicidal thoughts in her and him
Doing everything that we can
Just to end our lives today and now
Spend all of our time wondering how
Envisions of the gun, the rope and the knife
Thinking of how today you will end your life
Dont care about how the others will feel
Dont know that someones heart you will steal
When they see the person that they loved dead,
Theyll be beating themselves over the head
Because you went and put a knife to your throat
And said it was all too much for you to cope
And all your secret admirer can to do is cry
And wonder why it was you went and died
And wonder that maybe if they had told you
About their love for you, that youd love, too
But they didnt and they feel to blame
And they want to die on your name
So they pick up the gun and think about you
The thoughts went from me to you and to them, too
Well, what can you do? Theyre just thoughts of suicide,
Just someone else thinking of ways in which they can die
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Re: Suicidal Thoughts
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 11:50:38 AM AEST
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Good job with this write, alot of thought put into it...uhhh no pun intended :O
It is true though. As I said before, you just never know who's life you've affected, or will affect. Keep up the good writes sprints!
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Re: Suicidal Thoughts
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by Kazzy1231 on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 12:08:49 PM AEST
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