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cant admit
Contributed by
coolbreeze17
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Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 01:21:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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you know that one
older or younger
you know who they are
the one who calls out to you
for help or attention
the one who cant admit
that they've done wrong or
who isnt strong enough
to look you in the eye
and ask for help
but instead countiuies
to make things worst
the one odd in your life
well isnt it about time
to help and make things right
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Re: cant admit
(User Rating: 1 )
by BethB88 on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 05:29:07 AM AEST
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| Concise and strong, with a good stabby rhythm that couples well with the theme... i like it! |
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