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Comet Of Fire
Contributed by
spazz911
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Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 01:29:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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What have i done?
to reach lifes cruel agony
tossed to my doom
in a world full of pain.....
torn from the inside
of whats not meant to be
scorred with a pointer
a burning vision of me
sets my soul aflame
a burning comet of fire
then puts out the burning
with ice cold desire
ripping my soul
my heart and my passion
caught in the darkness
a tangeled transgression
fought for my freedoms
stand up to the pirate
who stole my forgiveness
and tossed in the pulpit
when does it matter?
what pain really means
when your staring at badder
badder focus of me
Copyright ©
spazz911
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2005-08-29 13:29:32]
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Re: Comet Of Fire
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by stellarview on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 03:12:32 PM AEST
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| I liked this poem. It got your point across and was well worded. |
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Re: Comet Of Fire
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by hoist1atca on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 07:08:29 PM AEST
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I like this-
Tells a story-
Always remember that anything you write is special as it is from you-
Never allow anyone,even yourself to say that your emotions are not good...
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Re: Comet Of Fire
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th March 2007 @ 02:49:33 PM AEST
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| I can feel your agony in this poem. This was very well done! |
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