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here we are
Contributed by
electrique_poet
on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 08:27:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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here we are waist to waist tied together at the head, theres no going left if you cant go right theres no innoscence to cover your sinful fight with bare knuckled fists and a tooth to decay shes gone;oblivion is where i stand-is where i watch;i perform the task of the clock as the racers rev their engines; countdown from 3, t-minus green, then we will play a game of checkers to see whos king
here we are hand in hand severed by our useless plans; if only you had prayed last nite perhaps youd regain your sight so lets get you a new time, and i want to see some speed,you know (i only condescend because i like to pretend im important
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Re: here we are
(User Rating: 1 ) by KarlaMarie on
Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 07:55:52 PM AEST (User
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i read it twice because it is very confusing and sent my head into a spin...
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Re: here we are
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 07:28:39 PM AEST (User
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as the other commenter said...it was a bit confusing. but - it was still amazing...and i loved it
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