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midnights prey
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 09:00:00 PM in AEST
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cool of night time to be one with the night
sleeping all day to escape summers light
hunger my need as i run my instincts set me free
hunting my prey the only way to be
running in the night following the sent
chasing what god has kindly left
i stop and i howl to bring out the fear
knowing that rabbit will soon be here
running this race me the rabbit the moon
my teeth snap dinner is soon
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Re: midnights prey
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by xxbreathlessx on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 09:59:57 PM AEST
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| i really enojoyed the poem in a wolf's perspective. you made in interesting, although i think you meant scent...not sent. but either way, good job.! |
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Re: midnights prey
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by Dralion on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 11:26:12 PM AEST
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This is good.
Of course--I like wolves (picked it up from my Dad). |
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Re: midnights prey
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 11:43:27 PM AEST
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How odd you should post this tonight. I was just outside a few minutes ago getting the animals up for the night and the wolves are howling on the other side of the creek. I hate that sound. The ranchers around here kill them when they can and string them up by the hind legs over a fence post by the road so others know they are prowling around. It is just the food chain of life and unless they came towards the house I would not shoot one. This is a great poem, I love it.
Do be careful, huh?
Rita |
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Re: midnights prey
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 01:04:22 AM AEST
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strange I agree with Rita though Iv moved to city now I was thinking of the coyotees and the wolfs. they are beautiful but I could not shoot one therefore I feel I might end up dinner if that ever happend I admire them from a safe distance
Michelle |
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Re: midnights prey
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 10:48:52 AM AEST
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I can relate to this flow
nice
umm,was it a werewolf?
he he...... |
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Re: midnights prey
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by mom11159 on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 11:30:57 AM AEST
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A great display of the mighty wolf on his hunting grounds and in his moment excellent job loved it totally
Cathy |
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