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Words that Cause Confusion
Contributed by
mangos
on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 09:37:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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After much deliberation
I have come to this conclusion
To remain in seclusion
Vested in the proper motivation
Reaping the rewards of this institution
And without any retribution
I give it my heart
I give it my all
Without hesitation
In a split second
A second chance is given
And suddenly
All is forgiven
Fear not this hasty decision
A healthy religion
A wealthy politician
Glamorous without intuition
Free spoken
With words that cause confusion
____________________________
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Copyright ©
mangos
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2005-08-29 21:37:25]
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Re: Words that Cause Confusion
(User Rating: 1 )
by Perfectly_flawed on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 09:47:00 PM AEST
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| I like it, its very poweful. I also like the fact that you did such a good job rhyming in the first verse, it doesn't sound cheesy, like I said its powerful. Keep it up. |
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Re: Words that Cause Confusion
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by xxbreathlessx on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 09:55:44 PM AEST
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| i love the style in which you wrote this, it really caught my attention. i like the meaning i get of this, even though it might not be what you were trying to express. its really an open poem that can relate to so much and i love the ending, great job |
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Re: Words that Cause Confusion
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 12:38:04 AM AEST
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This has a smooth flow to it, and was a good read, as your writes always are. Nice job.
Scorp. |
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