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she lost
Contributed by
tractorbabe
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Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 01:26:02 AM in AEST
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tear stains across her face
for the battle he won
she lost her race
all the marks she never told
he wont ever see
his loves grown old
lost his love,for her heart, to stay
hes found someone else
to plesure his days
only wanting for him to be happy
she picks up her self pretends shes ok
puts on a smile for another day
once shes gone, wil he ever know what he lost
were those few weekends worth the love he tossed
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Re: she lost
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 01:40:04 AM AEST
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very sad. Some guys just dont get it
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Re: she lost
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 07:18:58 AM AEST
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Awhhh this is sad but he can't appreciate u then he don't deserve her.
Hang tuff.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: she lost
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by KarlaMarie on
Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 07:43:12 PM AEST
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sounds to me that she won, she got rid of that toser and can move on with her life, while he just lost the best thing in his life.
i liked your poem good on ya
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