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Madness
Contributed by
PsychoticDreamz
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Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 12:40:00 PM in AEST
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Hello little girl or boy
I'm from inside your head
I'm all the voices you ignore
You act if though I'm dead
Well I have some news for ya kid
some good and some bad
of all those voices that u blocked
I'm the worst you could've had
You never can get rid of me
I'll always be right here
telling you to have some 'fun'
and drink a couple beers
So what if your not nice no more
and dont get as good of grades
You've now transfered to the darker side
turned two different shades...
We can have some real fun kid
Now that you act this way
Wont ever really shock someone
Let's have some fun today...
steal a couple cars sometime
grab a couple guns
that way when your shooting them
you'll never have to run
I think for you now you know
You'll never be the same
I've turned you into a murderer
Madness is no game
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PsychoticDreamz
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2003-01-15 12:40:00]
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Re: Madness
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 01:35:37 PM AEST
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| It turned out pretty well, the message is strong and doesn't stray. I think this is a great write. Keep it up! |
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Re: Madness
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 08:56:27 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this although I don't think it was a rap. I sometimes have voices in my head like that although a little different. i liked the last line 'madness is no game' so true it really stuck out.
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