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A Captive to your heart
Contributed by
gurlytye
on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 07:26:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Blinding pain
As blood pours from my broken heart
Sweet agony
As thoughts of you invade my mind
Escaping breath
As your words choke my soul
The walls rattle
As my essence screams for more
Titanium chains
Keep me prisoner to you
Aggravated passion
As love for you pounds through my veins
Inside this black hole
My life slips way
All control is lost
As my last thread of hope evaporates
Abandoned
In this sea of loneliness
Your love is gone
And the world is dead to me
A captive of your heart
Ill forever be.
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2005-08-30 19:26:45]
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Re: A Captive to your heart
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 08:08:07 PM AEST
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You are growing T ... it shows in your writing. You are experimenting with style and form and as I do that myself a bit ... I love to see that from you as well. Go Figure Huh ?
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Re: A Captive to your heart
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 10:35:16 PM AEST
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brilliant piece....it flowed so well and I loved your expressions of imagery...
i can relate to most of these bitter sweet feelings of love..............well done to you, be proud of this! |
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Re: A Captive to your heart
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 04:53:57 AM AEST
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Wow!!! this is fantastic. You have a beautiful way of using your imagery. This piece was brilliantly done.
I can't say I've seen your work before, but now that i know what your writes are i'll be looking forward to seeing more of your works soon.
Jane~ |
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