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Beautiful Prisoner
Contributed by
helzwar007
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Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 09:27:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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She is funny, laughs and is full of surprise,
So why do these people make her cry?
She is beautiful and no one can match up to her.
So why is she so full of hurt?
It may seem like she has it good,
But people make fun of her and she is misunderstood.
People are always talking behind her back,
And no one, accept her seem to notice that.
She comes home from school and her dad yells and screams,
But she still stays beautiful it seems.
After all this she still stays strong,
And waits for true love to come along.
Copyright ©
helzwar007
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2005-08-30 21:27:01]
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Re: Beautiful Prisoner
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by Kano on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 09:30:39 PM AEST
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| Good poem my friend, but don't give up on your friend, you may be the only thing that she has that is stable and if that is taken away then most likely you will never see the friend you used to know. Be there for her, that is what a friend does. |
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Re: Beautiful Prisoner
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 09:31:43 PM AEST
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| Very good write, heartfelt, I enjoyed reading it, can't wait to see more from you. |
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Re: Beautiful Prisoner
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by kamelion on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 09:44:11 PM AEST
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| I understood the poem but I cant help feeling as if there could have been more to it.... |
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Re: Beautiful Prisoner
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by bluebird on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 12:24:30 AM AEST
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can relate to this in so many ways...
beautiful write.
I agree with Kano. dont give up on your friend. You may the only one there to help.
~bb~ |
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