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If Adam Had'em
Contributed by
helzwar007
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Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 09:53:50 PM in AEST
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Haiku
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If Adam Hadem
Truth ate away at his skin
Soon to find sins eve.
Copyright ©
helzwar007
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2005-08-30 21:53:50]
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Re: If Adam Had'em
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by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 10:31:52 PM AEST
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| INTERESTING WRITE DID YOU JUST FIND THAT |
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Re: If Adam Had'em
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by Inevitable on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 11:36:57 PM AEST
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| Ok this was weird but interesting |
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Re: If Adam Had'em
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by Caged Soul on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 04:42:25 AM AEST
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| Personally, I think that is one of the weakest poems I,ve ever read. Usually with such short poems, there is no major word-play involved as the poet tries to convey his mesage with as little words as possible. The reason I think this poem is weak is because I don't know what the poet, whoever he is, is trying to say. |
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Re: If Adam Had'em
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 04:06:26 PM AEST
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Actually, Mohammed Ali created the shortest poem ever written;
Me?
Whee!
Interesting, but ultimately nonsensical. What did he have?
Keep writing |
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