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ULTIMATE TEST
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 10:30:11 PM in AEST
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walking in wonder with eyes of a child
smelling the breeze and creatures of the wild
rolling in untame flowers laughing like the mad
feeling pain escape the once illusions of sad
Me as the night running as wild as can be
slipping past trees and mountains all i see
fireflies illumanating the night with the moon behind
dancing in this painting this heavenly find
Watching the wild getting ready for sleep
as colours change my view the red oh so deep
this beauty of it all such an amazing dream
forgetting the past just a faded scream
this is another day out on my quest
finally understanding the ultimate test
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Re: ULTIMATE TEST
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 11:22:48 PM AEST
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*****walking in wonder with eyes of a child
smelling the breeze and creatures of the wild
rolling in untame flowers laughing like the mad
feeling pain escape the once illusions of sad
I like this .. eyes of a child. Oh yes. New, fresh.
*****dancing in this painting this heavenly find
Gorgeous picture here. I can see it.
*****finally understanding the ultimate test
Yes... the greatest of eyes see the beauty no matter to what extreme nature is leading up to.
Very nice analyses in life where you are at in time.
Raquel Leah :D |
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Re: ULTIMATE TEST
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 12:34:41 AM AEST
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Regan, this is absolutely wonderful. It would be so thrilling. Nature can cleanse you inside and out. Nothing is more beautiful or inspiring. What a lovely adventure you are having. One you will remember forever. I thank you for sharing it with us. Take care, till next visit.
Rita |
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Re: ULTIMATE TEST
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by mom11159 on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 11:27:36 AM AEST
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Excellent you put me there with you great imagery and your captivating words. How beautiful and serene nothing better You have done a suberb job with this poem loved every words of it.
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