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The Unknown
Contributed by
mckayla
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Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 04:49:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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smooth rocks collide at the bottom of a river
like an endless battle of life
that leaves a cold shiver.
timeless fights along the way
driving forces of insanity
through every waking day.
Mountains suffacate with every cold breath
trying to support life
unaware of the closeness of death
triumphs of darkness fills the sky
blinding the unknown
that passes by.
Katherine Leraye Chaffee
Copyright 2003 Katherine L Chaffee
Copyright ©
mckayla
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2003-01-15 16:49:47]
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Re: The Unknown
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 05:21:25 PM AEST
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Absolutely breathtaking Katherine....just beautiful....i love it....thanks for sharing...
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Re: The Unknown
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by wordsy on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 09:56:03 PM AEST
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And there lies the moment between life and death.
A nice write,
wordsy. |
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Re: The Unknown
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by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 02:24:49 PM AEST
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| wow.. you put such a dark picture to things i usually see as majestic and serene |
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Re: The Unknown
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 06:00:29 PM AEST
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wow, captivating words...talented writing...very thought provoking
hugs,
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Re: The Unknown
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by ArdRi79 on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 11:11:16 PM AEST
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| I really like nature the imagery yo used here, i Shivered in the river |
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