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My Inspiration
Contributed by
Bones
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Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 08:50:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
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What is this Im feeling Its been so long
My emotions for you still holding strong
Even after all this time we still seem to be in love
You make me feel like Im flying high above
Above all the chaos and destruction down below
Holding hands - Glaring into your eyes and you know
Ill always love you no matter where time may go
Reunited with the one that brought me so far
The one who inspired me to go on Write a new bar
Seems time has one strengthened what I feel
Im going to show you what wounds time will heal
Heartache brought me back to you
Made me promise Ill always be true
No matter what happens now Ill hold to you
Never wanting to let go And youll know
Ill always love you no matter where time may go
As if heartache wasnt enough
Im not perfect Im not tough
You dont see me out playing with the kids that play rough
But my feels have never been stronger
Im just glad our separation wasnt any longer
Broken into pieces Only you would but me back together
I just hope this feeling comfort would last forever
Reunited with the one that brought me so far
The one who inspired me to go on Write a new bar
Seems time has one strengthened what I feel
Im going to show you what wounds time will heal
You know nothing will tare me away
Not night Not even the light of day
I promise Ill never leave you again
Leaving you is the ultimate sin
I cant believe that I left you
From here on out Ill always be true
Ill always love you
Reunited with the one that brought me so far
The one who inspired me to go on Write a new bar
Seems time has one strengthened what I feel
Im going to show you what wounds time will heal
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Bones
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2005-08-31 20:50:59]
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Re: My Inspiration
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 08:53:08 PM AEST
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| Very good write, hearlfelt, glad you found the one. |
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Re: My Inspiration
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by brew on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 08:56:39 PM AEST
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Well you opened the eyes and the soul and didnt just listen ..you heard.! very beautiful and touching, hope she sees this. ! i would like it if I had one wrote to me as this piece was.!
Brew~ |
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Re: My Inspiration
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 09:15:23 PM AEST
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ooooo very beautiful sentiments.....reminds me of a poem I wrote along the same line....except I had to let go of the one I love....
moving write tho, sure did strike a string in my heart.....i love this part:
"Reunited with the one that brought me so far
The one who inspired me to go on – Write a new bar"
...that's an amazing line for a brilliant poem!!!
Thanks for sharing and I'm glad the one you love helped you heal. |
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Re: My Inspiration
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by Kano on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 10:46:18 PM AEST
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| Great poem, thanks for sharing |
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Re: My Inspiration
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by Kie on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 07:41:35 PM AEST
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This was a very upbeat -overall- poem. I really liked the ending. It seems (in your poem) that all ended as it should (or maybe I should say it began again on a new bar.
Kie :) |
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Re: My Inspiration
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 10:42:02 PM AEST
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awww.... you're love still holds strong. lucky you. is this the person that you loved for years and couldn't tell her? and does she love you back. sorry. sorry, great write, bones. keep it up!
~sprints
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