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No Love
Contributed by
Makeshift_2134
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Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 06:34:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I'm addicted to pain. I like to sit and cry.
Derpression and pain helps me feel alive.
I never wanted to turn out this way.
Alone and depressed I'm here to stay.
There was a time I felt alive. His love set me free.
Over time it came clear, he never loved me.
I'm always risking to lose it all.
One fake touch, a glance. I kiss and I fall.
I sense the dange but don't bother to run.
I risk everything. All for some fun.
Love is a tomb. A break from life's cruelty.
The angels cry blood and prey for mercy.
I know there's no church of silver and gold.
My judgment lies beyond marble and stone.
There's nothing left I hold tender and dear.
All that is left is my hatred and fear.
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2005-09-01 06:34:28]
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Re: No Love
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 06:38:19 AM AEST
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| Really good write, relatable, heartfelt, I liked it a lot keep up the good work, can't wait to see more. |
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Re: No Love
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by Kano on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 07:39:37 AM AEST
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| Really liked your poem, hopefully someday you will find someone that can make you feel that way once more. Keep up the good work. |
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Re: No Love
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by Destined_for_this on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 11:02:29 AM AEST
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| This was a great discription of mental tragedy. I know what you speak of. Very well spoken! |
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