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Autumn
Contributed by
mom11159
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Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 12:14:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Beautiful colors everywhere
Wind blowing, through your hair
Birds preparing to fly away
Leaves are raked, everyday
The feeling inside when you look around
Wondrous colors on the ground
Trees take on a glorious dcor
Autumn's the season, I do adore
The cool breeze on a Autumn day
Entices children, to go out and play
Jumping in leaves, making scarecrows
Is what they do, as Autumns flows
The feeling of peace flows through the air
The feeling in us, the feeling is there
Just take a deep breath, let it in
Your face will relax, your heart will grin
So take the experience that Autumn can give
Let your spirit and soul truly live
Open your heart to truly trust
The beauty of Autumn, that God gave to us!!!!
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Re: Autumn
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by doug on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 01:07:00 PM AEST
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You've swept me away in your autumn and I could'nt be more happy to be here. In my dream of heaven it is always autumn.
Superb and comforting poem , love doug |
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Re: Autumn
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 06:32:37 PM AEST
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I can begin to live again. It is September and in October I will be totally happy. Autumn is my time of the year. My spirits are brighter and I am more in tune with the universe and her visions. This is such a beautiful poem. Your work always is amazing.
Hugs,
Rita |
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Re: Autumn
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 01:06:45 AM AEST
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i come alive in autumn especially being from new england, u r awsome, and a style second 2 none, lovey peice of writting, a literary poetic
painting . . . **********
Ben |
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Re: Autumn
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 09:16:38 AM AEST
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| Once again you take us with you due to your beautiful and wonderful knack of imagery. Yes, this is another great one. :) |
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