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Slow Dance
Contributed by
addicted2selfharm
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Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 03:02:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I see a couple dancing together, so graceful like two flowers in the wind.
Oh, how I envy them, wishing that could be us.
To have a slow dance and hold each other tight, not wanting to let go afraid of the pain that will come.
How I wish we could go back in time, just to see you one last time.
Even if we were both crying, with blood shot eyes from spending every last moment together.
What I wouldn't do to just see your beautiful face, and to hug you one last time...
Distance is such a burden, such a pain. But I know it cant happen, we can't be together for awhile.
So alone I must remain.
So I'll stand here in the pooring rain with these bleeding wrists, playing this sad love song until you take my hand and we finally have our one slow dance...
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2005-09-01 15:02:59]
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Re: Slow Dance
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by Doriens_Picture on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 07:52:25 PM AEST
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| I know Trev misses you a great deal i know i would and time passes and soon you will have eachother again just please i feel like slashing away every day all the pain i feel but i try and not to i wish you could do the same i know we have not talked in ages but i cant lose some one like you and i no trev could not either he would just blame him self |
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Re: Slow Dance
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by starry_eyed_soul on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 09:31:41 PM AEST
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| good job.... |
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Re: Slow Dance
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by brew on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 09:36:07 PM AEST
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Pretty write, of how 2 dance.!
Brew~ |
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Re: Slow Dance
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 09:42:33 PM AEST
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wow.....so tremendously sad especially the last line....I do still feel this way and would give anything to spend ONE more mintute with the one I love...so this poem did strike my heart.
You conveyed your forlorn emotions very well...and I honestly feel for you.
Your a wonderful poet. Please take hope and be strong. |
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Re: Slow Dance
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by Gothchyk on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 02:44:29 AM AEST
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| this remined me of the song Slow Dance by Rufio...amazing and heartfelt write |
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