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Clean and Pure
Contributed by
mckayla
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Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 02:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Hey its me.
Well it's been almost a year and all's the same.
I can't believe I made it this far and without you here.
What I miss most is the stuff that didn't matter,
oooh how I loved thee where are you now?
It must be nice to be happy somewhere else.
Crazy minds;
though not yours how you wish it was, but mine.
Learning roads are easy, the paths are more difficult.
I wonder what path I'll take.
Hopefully it will lead to your door.
When it opens;
your soul that wasn't there before.
Appears clean and pure
Katherine L Chaffee
Copyright 2003 Katherine L Chaffee
Copyright ©
mckayla
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2003-01-15 02:00:00]
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Re: Clean and Pure
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by Ramfire on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 08:58:07 PM AEST
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I really like the lines: " oooh how I loved thee where are you now?
It must be nice to be happy somewhere else.
Crazy minds; "
I think the only way possible for a person to make his/her soul "Clean and Pure" is for that person to ask forgiveness of God for their sins - seeking redemption though the finished work of Jesus Christ on the cross.
Regards,
Ramfire
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Re: Clean and Pure
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by wordsy on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 09:49:40 PM AEST
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A yearning for that which is lost to us.
A good read,
wordsy |
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Re: Clean and Pure
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 07:39:21 PM AEST
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Hey you're very good,
have to say I had to read this one thrice,(it's late here, my brain!?!)
I can relate to this very well, except for me it's been longer than a year!:-(
Great write
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: Clean and Pure
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 06:03:23 PM AEST
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a very bittersweet mood to this poem...but very well said...why don't you have more up? you write so well...
:-)
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Re: Clean and Pure
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by ArdRi79 on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 11:14:07 PM AEST
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| ooh I commented on the repost of this, I love the old version2 *breathes in the dust* |
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