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What Dads Are For
Contributed by
pretty_n_pink
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Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 07:04:14 PM in AEST
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I will take away your innocence
I'll leave you cold and bare
I'll put you out in the pouring rain,
and leave you without a care.
I'll mutilate your body
I'll manipulate your head
I'll suffocate you with my lies,
and laugh when you are dead.
I'll twist your words around
to make me the "good guy"
I'll trap you in a corner,
and spit on you when you cry.
I'm here to make you feel worthless
I'm here to make you mad
I'm NOT here to love you
I'm here because I'm your DAD!!!
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Re: What Dads Are For
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by justme03 on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 07:25:06 PM AEST
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awww
my dads mean to me sometimes and we dont get along but it seems u have it worse then me. *huggles* i hope things get better. its not right for "dads" to b liek that. |
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Re: What Dads Are For
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by Doriens_Picture on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 07:47:55 PM AEST
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my dad and i get along most of the time but we have our issues and what not im mean we fight alot over petty things
im sometimes scarred to be a father my self one day
even though i have helped raise my nephew and niece and they love me greatly
a very sad but still great write |
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Re: What Dads Are For
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by trini on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 08:25:34 PM AEST
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nice write. you captured most dads in action. i wouldn't know considering my dad left me when i was little. best not to dwell. if you cant stand him, go visit a friend for a while...get away. im not saying run away im saying get away, find your peace and return. keep up the good work
-trini |
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Re: What Dads Are For
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by brew on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 08:47:44 PM AEST
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I am so sorry, Dads are not supose to be like that. Some are, and some mom as well. I am lucky now. My dad didnt care so much when i was younger, yet we have a Great relationship, now. hes like my best friend.can tell him anything, and he listens. I hope maybe yall can subside what he doesnt have,! You know , life is toooooooo short.!
Brew~ |
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Re: What Dads Are For
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 09:12:44 PM AEST
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woah...thats intense..
I am real sorry you're Dad treats you like this, I cannot imagine how that must feel...all I can say is he will regret it in the end..
Very powerful poem, very honest.
Thanku for sharing and hope to you! |
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Re: What Dads Are For
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by HatchetGirl on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 02:57:15 AM AEST
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| A perfect description of most dads... because some do care.... not mine.... he's only good for money... I have a poem about my dad too. It's called Don't Cry if your interested... if not oh well your loss... lol just kidding |
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