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One Right After The Other
Contributed by
Kie-Kie
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Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 11:51:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
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One right after the other
They set themselves up for heartache
Walking upon broken glass
To be sent back with more pain than they can take
One right after the other
They line up for the fall
To ask a daring question
Only to be sent home barely able to crawl
One right after the other
They take a fast, steep dive
Off the ledge that they built up
Only to feel like they're barely alive
One right after the other
They lay their hearts on the line
Wishing, hoping, praying
That they'll recieve something divine
One right after the other
I have to tell them no
It's a fact I'll always hate
But I'm afraid it must be so
Because one right after the other
Every guy before
Made up a new torture
To hurt me a little more
Copyright ©
Kie-Kie
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2005-09-01 23:51:01]
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Re: One Right After The Other
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 01:25:09 AM AEST
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((((((((((((Kie-Kie))))))))))) such wisdom and such hurt and so deserving of love and so shall u receive it in time my friend in time till
then protect that heart of yours, your well on your way and don't even know yet, but he will
and one day amidst all the evil, you shall be
triumphant over love. . .
((((((((((((Kie-Kie)))))))))))))))
Ben |
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Re: One Right After The Other
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 02:39:14 AM AEST
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| yup, women are evil |
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Re: One Right After The Other
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 03:18:36 AM AEST
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You hit this nail on the head.
This is why I stand on the sidelines and spend my time observing; one of its better uses.
Nicely done!
Andrew
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Re: One Right After The Other
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by blowfish_jane on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 07:19:34 AM AEST
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Yup this is true. We could be evil if we wanted to. Were not saying we do it all the time but we do get bad sometimes LOL.
A lovely honest write Kielapoo. It's good to see your poems again.
Hugs,
Jane~ |
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Re: One Right After The Other
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 10:17:35 AM AEST
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| I'm sure some people will really relate to this. I certianly can. Just as there are good, there are bad also. Nice flowing write. Chris. |
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Re: One Right After The Other
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by KishaLovesCare126 on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 01:28:43 PM AEST
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hi gurl,
well i dint know where to begin I only know that I'm going to print this off one day and have it in mi book of favorite poem's once i get that going. I'm being slow on that lol I agree we can be mean (well some females) so yea I happen to know a few *rolls eyes* k well I'm going to go u take care sweetie n i'll try to catch up on ur poems' some more. -huggles- be safe stay beautiful.
much love n poet respect
Care
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Re: One Right After The Other
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by sweetangeluk on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 06:22:06 AM AEST
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Wonderful honest write
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: One Right After The Other
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 07:44:27 PM AEST
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So much truth behind ur words. An outstanding and brilliant write.
Hugs,
Sue, Dreamer |
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Re: One Right After The Other
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by slogan on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 11:30:06 PM AEST
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| excellent poem...jh |
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