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You don't know the real me...
Contributed by
undiscoveredshadow
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Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 09:37:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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You look at me and see a beautiful girl,
with the perfect life, the perfect world.
You see me laughing and smiling all the time
But what you see is all fake
I laugh and smile to hide the tears and fears
There's so much behind my smile you just don't see
It's like you don't even know the real me
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undiscoveredshadow
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2005-09-02 09:37:35]
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Re: You don't know the real me...
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by brew on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 10:35:50 AM AEST
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beautiful self write, but much sadness.do not hide the REAL you.....ever. Make it be known, you are human, with feelings. !
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Re: You don't know the real me...
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by justme03 on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 11:08:39 AM AEST
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wow
such a beautiful poem
i know how this is exactly
*huggles* |
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Re: You don't know the real me...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 02:57:54 PM AEST
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| A very beautiful poem, I liked it, the ending topped it off, but you should not hide the real you at all, you need to get the real you out, so people know that you exist, if you dont get the real you out then people will go on not knowing you. Good write. SLipSiX. |
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