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Truth
Contributed by
Caged Soul
on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 10:59:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When we are apart, my soul goes into a spasm.
When were together I get an emotional orgasm.
Your beauty is what dreams are made of
I love you cuz you so intellectual, so sexual.
You stimulate my physical, mental & visual.
You are the queen of eternal satisfaction,
with you, frustration aint even an option
Your supreme presence resulting from the very essence of you supernatural being
demands jaw dropping awe where you are seen.
When you look me in the eyes, you bring all resistance to crumbs.
When you speak to me, it feels like your making love to my eardrums.
When you dance its pure poetry causing the pertrution of my desire to acquire your undeniable perfection
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Caged Soul
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2005-09-02 10:59:05]
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Re: Truth
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 02:49:22 PM AEST
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| Wow, haha, the first two stanzas really surprised me, it sounded good though, I just felt it hit my heart you know, seemed very powerfull, keep up the sweet work. SLipSiX. |
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Re: Truth
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 09:25:53 AM AEST
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wow. this is "your ultimate feel-good" poem right here. *grins from ear to ear*
I love the intention and i love the honesty beneath this. Some interesting analogies, here :) This is awesome. Good work ;) |
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Re: Truth
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by remote on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 03:32:29 PM AEST
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| "When you speak to me, it feels like you're making love to my eardrums." Umm, now thats quite interestingly put. Holds attention till the very end. |
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