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Hollow point

Contributed by Rawjer on Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 08:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



This situation is blowing my mind
everybodys hate is blooming over time
you lost another battle you have no friends
is it really wrong
to give back to which it sends

Have the hollow point in my hand
gripping tightly in my palm it turns to sand
all the flowers will wilt and die
look to the horizen
look to where the hollow point lie

Lock and load
hollow point
hollow point
hollow point

Im not ready to see you again
Im not ready to be you again
Im not ready to bend at the break point
Im not ready to take in the hollow point

I have another reason for being here
and you just act as if your dont care
stripped away your month of may
as it comes charging
out where the hollow point lay

Have it not been for my strength
I would have not done it
Have it not been for my thoughts
I would be crazy now
Have it not been for the hollow point
I would still be here now

Lock and load
hollow point
hollow point
hollow point

Im not ready to see you again
Im not ready to be you again
Im not ready to bend at the break point
Im not ready to take in the hollow point

Have it not been for my strength
I would have not done it
Have it not been for my thoughts
I would be crazy now
Have it not been for the hollow point
I would still be here now




Copyright © Rawjer ... [ 2003-01-15 20:20:00]
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Re: Hollow point (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 03:58:13 AM AEST
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Oh how beautiful is this one....thought about ever getting published?..this is great...very beautiful ...
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Re: Hollow point (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 12:17:19 PM AEST
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I like the strenght of the words, the meaning of your written work is different to everyone when we read it. The power it has is what I like. "Is easy to fail in life always harder to get up and look ahead" (Amina from Texas)


Re: Hollow point (User Rating: 1 )
by Garethuk on Saturday, 1st February 2003 @ 10:11:59 AM AEST
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How true is this poem? to keep going in the face of great odds, so difficult for everyone. Keep up the good work!




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