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Frozen Tears
Contributed by
Mild_Tempest
on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 08:57:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Cold Tears
It pains me to say,
As you walked away.
The saddest good bye,
That tears can cry.
The grief that swells,
The ache now dwells.
Stare into my eyes,
So our love never dies.
Come back I whisper,
Come back together.
Hold me once more,
Have me to adore.
Ill wait here everyday,
Till the sun fades away.
I miss you I cried,
My fear I cant hide.
Where theres little joy,
There was always you.
I cry cold lonely tears,
I miss you, I miss you.
Copyright ©
Mild_Tempest
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2005-09-02 20:57:04]
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Re: Frozen Tears
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 09:05:30 PM AEST
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| Great Poem I can totally relate. I was touched by the sorrow. |
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Re: Frozen Tears
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by Crissyx12 on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 09:49:55 PM AEST
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| It's really good. The only thing I would change is the third stanza. |
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Re: Frozen Tears
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by veenu on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 12:23:29 AM AEST
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nice poem ..........
why i move miles to see u smile........
love cant be defined but pain will always
liked the poem
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Re: Frozen Tears
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by venkat on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 05:35:40 AM AEST
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| At your best you did it..therefore I will not suggest any change..what ever emotion you feel keep writing on with good phrases as you did here. venkat |
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Re: Frozen Tears
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 09:29:49 PM AEST
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This is truly lovely...even it its sadness...
Well done
Jenni |
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Re: Frozen Tears
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by candysears on
Friday, 23rd December 2005 @ 06:12:36 PM AEST
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Very well written.
God Bless!
Candy |
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