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endurance of the heart
Contributed by
kamelion
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Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 12:18:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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If you were to ask me then, I would have said yes
And if you were to ask me now I would still say yes
Yes from the beginning you stole my heart
And up until now I still have not ask for it back
It has refused to ever return back to me
Compelling urges stir from within
Wanting you, lusting you, loving you all of you
Yet there may come a time when youll forget
Its within your palm, my heart you secure
Soft under the tipsplease do not make a hard fist
For it is then you squeeze the life from it
When stroked by your fingers
Like birds to the weather, feathers of a bird
My heart knows by the touch, needless for a word
It is light but heavy
Hardly a whole lot for you to carry
Equipped with longevity and delicacy
You have the key,
Continue to unlock me
For my heart is yours to endure for the journey
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2005-09-03 00:18:18]
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Re: endurance of the heart
(User Rating: 1 )
by sick_n_twisted on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 03:46:12 AM AEST
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nice write i can seriously relate i love this part :: It is light but heavy
Hardly a whole lot for you to carry
Equipped with longevity and delicacy
You have the key,
Continue to unlock me
For my heart is yours to endure for the journey
good job
Deedee, |
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Re: endurance of the heart
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 12:54:40 AM AEST
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Beautiful piece, infused with sadness. Yet very well done, with delicate and inspiring imagery. May the road rise up.
Andrew |
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