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turbulence
Contributed by
igba
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Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 03:40:59 AM in AEST
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my chains ,my pains
my tears ,my fears
i dream and scream
my thoughts like shots tear me
is there a way out?
endangered ,though for help i shout
lord ,my zeal go tired and fled
for my self inflicted wounds ,i have bled
my paranoia is legendary
phony pals wanna send me to the cemetary
i tense at every movement
death lurks at every moment
struggling to come to terms with my vulnerability
amazed at my incapability
i throw up my arms in despair
God swiftly moved to repair
Copyright ©
igba
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2005-09-03 03:40:59]
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Re: turbulence
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by Caged Soul on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 05:16:51 AM AEST
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Firstly I wanna say this is "duidelik"!( that means really cool).You succeed in bringing forth your emotions and really involve the reader with each stanza. I also just wanna say that everyone goes through a time where they feel that they are totally useless or helpless. Look on the bright side; it makes you write good poetry!
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Re: turbulence
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by Kamal on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 09:40:29 AM AEST
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Forget his comment becasue regardless of what we go through is only temporary.... Bad things don't last forever, even though we could express ourselves from our experience but thats just temporary so is the expression... I can't wait until you express yourselves when your not down
I bet its phenomenal....
Peace Great write..
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