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Subtle Secrets of Death and Pain
Contributed by
purplestary
on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 12:22:13 PM in AEST
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Getting tired and he isn't calling
rejecting sleep,despite the ugly truth.
alone again, left out of life
never win, but always a friend.
might ask him why he did not call
yet buy his lies, smile and knod
one more hour, feels like two
tv tuned to channel five
there's the phone, heart skips a beat
caller ID reveals defeat.
destined to be alone and let down
pushed aside forevermore.
inconvenience and unimportant
never win, but always a friend
two more hours, feels like four
TV's off, bed is calling.
shut one eye, never two
awaiting the moment life throws a turn
twisting the mind, giving butterflies wings
back out of bed, pacing the floor
Kill the butterflies, rip off their wings!
secret thoughts of pain and death..
gouge the eyes, pull out the hair!
never win,.....but always a friend
Ask him why he never called
Buy his lies......Smile and Knod.....
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Re: Subtle Secrets of Death and Pain
(User Rating: 1 )
by IraHaze on
Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 01:31:02 AM AEST
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| This particular poem captured an element that alot of poems don't contain, and that's the rythm of the story. The lines flowed seamless and the hook added a nice touch, Good stuff. |
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Re: Subtle Secrets of Death and Pain
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by trackiller2006 on
Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 11:44:41 PM AEST
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Holy Crackers Purp!! I think I should be the follower not you.
Great Write!! |
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Re: Subtle Secrets of Death and Pain
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Thursday, 17th September 2009 @ 08:29:41 PM AEST
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| Deep/thought provoking. |
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