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The Path
Contributed by
NoangelNohope
on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 06:07:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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Falling tears only
fall elegantly upon
a silken road.
A maiden wanders
along pondering
meanings of her
journeys past.
Simple tears dotted
onto her patchwork
skin cover with lies
from memories before.
She screams and the
tears part a fragile
line for her to walk
forth on.
T' was hard for her to
push onward yet she
finds the strength.
Jagged edges on teardrops
rip at the damsel's thin
clothing creating new
terrors within.
Lustrous beads of rose
liquid form lines entwined
with the fabric of
her patchwork skin.
She closes her eyes.
Lets her own tears fall.
Lets her own tears open.
And at last she is able
to sprint across the
balance beam of mournfulness
to find her stitched
up smile among all
the flaws life conceived.
She bleeds and cries,
but is free amongst it all.
Finally.
Copyright ©
NoangelNohope
... [
2005-09-03 18:07:00]
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Re: The Path
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by gary on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 06:15:33 PM AEST
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| That was first class for me if I were writing a book this poem would be on page five to attract readers to by my book! |
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Re: The Path
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by trini on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 06:16:44 PM AEST
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wow. i liked the way that you wrote this poem. it had a certain ipseity to it. very well done. i hope to see more.
-trini |
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Re: The Path
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by justme03 on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 06:34:27 PM AEST
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i liekd this very much! it was different and so i liked it
great poem! |
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Re: The Path
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 12:05:17 PM AEST
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welcome to the club
well done
I like the way this one flows..... |
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Re: The Path
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by expired_promises on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 09:28:43 PM AEST
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to find her stitched
up smile among all
the flaws life conceived.
this says so much, i throughly enjoyed reading this, your images are so vivid, they take me out of this world and into yours
complete and utter beauty |
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