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“Our Corrupted World”
Contributed by
KishaLovesCare126
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Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 10:55:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
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9/3/2005 9:08 PM
What happened to the world?
What happened to its shine?
People use to be happy
We never had to hide
Now were running for our lives
Trying to stay survive.
Fighting off the enemies
Just before the sun is a rise
Pray for our own safety
We look toward the heavenly sky.
Bombs are going off
Blasting the world away
Killing all our soldiers
In our prayers they stay
When theyre so far away.
Families falling apart
Lovers ripped out of their arms
Brothers killed
This planet is unfulfilled
People take Prozac pills
This life is so meaningless
Its no longer a loving thrill.
Cutters slice their very skin
Sink a razor deeper in
Drunks throw their lives in a gutter
A silent girl is killed by her own mother
Anger is lashed out in so many ways
Tomorrow comes and still its a terrible day.
Unborn fetes aborted
The father couldnt support it
Danger hides in every corner
Tears are sliding down our cheeks
We are losing a lot of sleep
Thoughts ponder us every hour.
This is our world
It has fallen apart
Were longer safe
So we live in the dark.
Care
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2005-09-03 22:55:04]
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Re: “Our Corrupted World”
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by trini on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 11:31:10 PM AEST
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oh so true.
[great write by the way]
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Re: “Our Corrupted World”
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by inoc on
Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 01:46:47 AM AEST
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It's absolutly cruel and scarey....
your poem speaks the truth
...if only it wasn't hey!
Your poem deserves a 5!
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