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(Evil) Loco Motive
Contributed by
earthman
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Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 01:52:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Evil locomotive
Burnin down the train tracks.
Chaos and terror,
Churnin from the smoke stacks.
Rickity wracket,
Chiga chuga choo choo.
Clickity clackin,
Slick black voodoo.
The screamin engineer,
You may hear his torchered wail.
As demon volunteers,
Are fumin fear on scorchin rails.
This crazy train,
Dont lug a car for stokin coal.
This crazy train,
Has chugged this far on broken souls.
The lazy faith caboose, cant break loose,
Caught fishin, in the wishin well.
Locked in, last on the line,
Of good intentions, that finish in hell.
EvilTrainMessage
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earthman
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2005-09-04 01:52:18]
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Re: (Evil) Loco Motive
(User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 11:38:08 AM AEST
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Well now~~! Welcome to YPDC, earthman! This is very seriously a fine first post! If this is any indication of what we're to find when heading to your page in the future, I'll be sure to stop back often!
Finding this creative, intriguing and very well presented,
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Re: (Evil) Loco Motive
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by DemonProdigy on
Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 05:52:46 PM AEST
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| Damn, that would make a kick ass song! Great job. |
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