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SHE STOOD IN A SHADOWED DOORWAY
Contributed by
robertdavidson
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Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 08:26:57 AM in AEST
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SHE STOOD IN A SHADOWED DOORWAY
by Robert Davidson
She stood in a shadowed doorway
Awaiting the appointed time of delight
Eyes mocking love as
Lips of lust gleam in a moon-blanched night.
She stood in a shadowed doorway
When I shattered the dark with a light
Claiming a fierce kiss on
The porcelain pallor of a face so white.
She stood in a shadowed doorway
The touch of her body against mine stuns
As our sexes meet
Vaster than explosions of vast suns.
Our lone paths cross, then are blown apart forever
As I got what I wanted, and she her cash did recover.
The scowl of pleasure's lips now scorn me ever
Point down to the pit, mocking this sated lover.
She stood in a shadowed doorway
Her look of reproach unnerves, conceives
A cool challenge while
My lust blew away like dead winter leaves
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Re: SHE STOOD IN A SHADOWED DOORWAY
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by Cupid on
Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 10:11:33 AM AEST
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No comments?
Well, I'll fix that.
This is a WORK OF ART!
It reminds me of a Lord Byron poem called 'She Walks In Beauty.'
You display a good understanding of imagery and language here.
Keep writing my friend! |
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Re: SHE STOOD IN A SHADOWED DOORWAY
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by emystar on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 08:22:05 AM AEST
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Very thought provoking write.
huggs,
emy |
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