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behind the door
Contributed by
spirit_of_dark_tears
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Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 03:04:07 PM in AEST
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If life is pointless why live it, if life has value why are we here
we all look for the door that doesn't exsist only to realize
that the dream we dreamt was never real and life is a nightmare
we never wake up from if life was of worth why have it if
life was real why do we search for the door that doesn't exsist
life is to love life is to hate life is to live life is to die life is to
gain life is to lose if life were to feel would i be of value
if life is to why do we search search for a way out and why can't
we wake up from the nightmare we all come from to live is to
live to die is to die but to exsist is to dream to dream is to
find the door and reality is the nightmare you never wake up from
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Re: behind the door
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 03:13:09 PM AEST
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Soo true, powerful powerful stuff
Sadman |
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Re: behind the door
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by gwenevere on
Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 03:45:15 PM AEST
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| To live is to love, to love is to care, to care is to share, to share is to recieve to recieve is to love, to love is to live, Ros |
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Re: behind the door
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by Archie on
Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 06:30:23 PM AEST
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I don't agree with the beliefs in your poem but it is well written.
I think we make life a nightmare. I will call that my opinion so as to not take away from the meaning of your poem. |
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Re: behind the door
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 08:21:26 AM AEST
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life does have point and value. it is you who decides your purpose. but sometimes i myself wonder why am i hear? and would people miss me if i was gone.
well written, hope to hear more
~Bethani~ |
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