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Life
Contributed by
Writting_Fever
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Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 07:49:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Have you ever feel outa place,
Or someone stabed you in the back,
Do you tink that you fell in a hole,
From all the friendship they lack?
When you try to do your best to please,
But no one gives a care about you,
Don't you feel you have to try again,
Until you find a likeable you?
It's the crap you go through every day,
It's a living world of hell,
But when you go home it's a new story,
'Cause you tend to hide it so well,
People look at you and wonder,
How you got that way,
But all they see is your curious eye,
And the mood you're in today,
Your 'bout to jump off thta cliff,
The cliff that could just end your time,
You want to slit your wrists of blood,
'Cause you want your life like mine,
You're on that edge of breaking,
But no one's there to help,
You fight and fight with your bad life,
'Cause you think little of yourself,
Going to school is such a drag,
You eat lunch all alone,
In the class you sit in back,
The bell rings and you cry for home,
You've got a job to do,
Wipe off the tables clean,
The pay's no good, no one cares,
How your boss gets so mean,
It'll get better soon,
Go get some sleep tonight,
But please keep fighting,
And hang on to your life.
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Writting_Fever
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2005-09-04 19:49:25]
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Re: Life
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by twisted_dreams on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 09:53:29 PM AEST
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wow Sarah.. that is so good...you can truly touch lives with this poem! It is writtin so well... keep up the the good work!
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Re: Life
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by BurriedByMyLies on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 10:25:49 PM AEST
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| A very inspiring poem, something all of us go through, and the message it sends is a boost that some of us need. Thank you, hope you have more like this one ! |
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