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smashed
Contributed by
hardrocker15198916
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Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 09:36:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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i will smash her head against the wall
make her bleed in screaming calls
blood pouring out from her bloody teeth
pained in no feelings but made a dream
hide how it all began
the final reason why she ran
caused by me; because i made her die
take the vision know the lie
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Re: smashed
(User Rating: 1 )
by Karlee14 on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 01:31:38 AM AEST
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| Oh my this is well oh my... |
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Re: smashed
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by sride686 on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 06:42:27 AM AEST
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| So few words but yet so deep it goes. Its amazing what your mind can write and how dark and crooked it can be but its also fun to see were it will take you. A good write with strong meaning and very well worded. So much anger in this write and it’s a great way to get emotion out. Talk to you later….Steve |
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Re: smashed
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by princess_of_pain on
Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 11:05:10 AM AEST
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| very angry... but i like it. it reminds me of me. i wanted to hurt somebody like that. but i never had the strength or courage to. i suck. wow. but good poem. |
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