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Come Home...
Contributed by
xofireangel27
on
Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 11:06:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Ever since you passed away
I feel so lost
I feel like I cant go on
I feel like I need you
I cant stand this,
This one-way conversation
Please come back
And help me along
I need you back,
Back in my life
So many others
Feel the same as I do
So please,
Come back home
XoFireAngel27
August 24, 2005
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2005-09-04 23:06:26]
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Re: Come Home...
(User Rating: 1 )
by PoetBaby814 on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 12:53:46 AM AEST
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| i think that its good it is semi rushed but i like short sweet poems and the spacing help add a nice touch |
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Re: Come Home...
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by sick_n_twisted on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 06:46:11 AM AEST
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sweet poem...i know how u feel i lost one of my best friends....and it hurts...i know how u
feel....this is such a emotional poem.....great write |
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Re: Come Home...
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by djs on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 05:15:47 PM AEST
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| i lost my best friend a few yrs ago, and your words describe exactly how i have felt every day since then. i really like this poem. |
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