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Untold
Contributed by
ruthie1983
on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 01:06:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Undone and untold,
Heartache is what is felt,
What I see is unforeseen,
The secret hidden deep within,
Ashamed of what happened,
My face is lifted above,
Tears dropping,
I am not the same person,
Injustice being performed,
I cannot do anything,
Lifting my head to watch,
My eyes changing pace,
My mind is blank,
Something terrible is withheld,
Its hidden within the heart,
Never to be spoken about.
Copyright ©
ruthie1983
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2005-09-05 01:06:03]
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Re: Untold
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 02:47:16 AM AEST
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I adore the fashion by which this piece has been composed. It is an abyss of depth and layers. Almost abstract, in a sense.
The choice of words intrigue, especially when refering to "the" heart!
As if one is attempting to veil the already invisible to the eye :)
Thanks for sharing.
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